Pitching a story.

I did it.
I pitched my story to another author for a contest she is holding.
Donna Alward. I found her webpage by chance--or no, through my a CP--and I hate to say, I haven't even read one of her books...yet. I will. It wouldn't be right not to. :)
The contest closes at the end of the month.
I'll let you know what happens.

I do things on the spur of the moment...alot.
this was one of those moments. No editing, no researching. Just throw something together and shoot an email. I must be nuts. [Time will tell]

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It's snowing again on the Plains.
We're all cuddled up in our home, enjoying the winter weather...
I think I finally figured out what to do about exercising.
I'm going to try tomorrow, using our little Vehicle DVD player while I'm on the treadmill.
Hopefully that stupid thing isn't slipping on it's belts...tensioner needs some work.

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My manuscript is revised and completed through chapter five. You could say six, but I would like to get a few more crits before I move on. I've done my own revisions through chapter thirteen...and have a rewrite ready for thirteen when I submit the original and my CPs holler that it's BAD! VERY BAD! LOL That never happens, btw. But I'm pretty worried about that chapter cuz it has a love scene in it...and maybe it's too soon. *eyeroll* Anyhoo. We shall see what they say, when they type it. :D

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Thanks for stopping by.
See ya around.
Bethanne

Picture Challenge

From Janice!! Thanks for thinking of me Janice, my one constant blog companion.
RULE: The rules are simple. Use google image to search the answers to the questions below. Then you must choose a picture in the first page of results,and post it as your answer.

The Age of my next Birthday:





Lockheed Martin's 1998
X-33, A ROCKET... :D







Place I'd like to Travel:




Mackinac Island -- picture courtesy of http://www.teamshackchicago.com/ from Google Images.


I love this place. Haven't been there since I was a child. Would LOVE to go back.



A Favorite Place:



You won't believe this... this is an avatar from a forum. The Google search brought me this picture from a member whose location was: In my husband's arms. :)


A Favorite food:














A Favorite Thing:


















City I was born:



West Islip, New York -- don't ask me what that picture is off... LOL


Nickname I had:

















Name of My Love:




Apparently there's a Matt Strasser in the military as well... 1st Sgt. in the US Army.


*shrug* Lots of people out there...


Favorite Color:













Hobby:














A Bad Habit:

That would be SWEARING. Like i'm doing right now, because blogger can really drive me crazy!!!! CRAZY!
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My Wishlist:
SELL A NOVEL.
One thing I learned while doing this...blogger formatting does NOT stay true when inserting images. I can NOT believe how long it took me to do this...with all the backspacing and rearranging that needed to be done. Why doesn't the picture go in where the cursor is? why does it default to the top of the page? am I the only one with this problem???? UGH!

I had an idea

...and it included a story that might be considered fanfiction. Strange, I've never done fanfiction before. Not seriously. I'm not going to do it now, either...[not that there's anything wrong with it]...but my characters will be based/inspired on a couple I watched in a movie this week.

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In other news:
I told my kids to brush their teeth. My daughter is yelling at my son to brush his teeth. I yell, why are you yelling at your brother?
He didn't brush his teeth!
Why do you care about his teeth? [pretty sure she doesn't. she just feels injustice in the air]
He didn't brush his teeth!
If he says he brushed his teeth, fine. I replied.
But--!
If he's lying, Jesus will take care of it! I don't have to!!! Is what I called out.
I might have made a deal out of his lying...cuz, he was...as far as I know, lying...but she'd already made such a huge stink.
And now they're both yelling... ALOT. and they'll be in their rooms after school.
:-) Yay me.

Happy Birthday

Edgar Allen Poe
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Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary,Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,As of someone gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door." 'Tis some visitor," I muttered, "tapping at my chamber door;Only this, and nothing more."

Ah, distinctly I remember, it was in the bleak December,And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.Eagerly I wished the morrow; vainly I had sought to borrowFrom my books surcease of sorrow, sorrow for the lost Lenore,.For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore,Nameless here forevermore.

And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtainThrilled me---filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before;So that now, to still the beating of my heart, I stood repeating," 'Tis some visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door,Some late visitor entreating entrance at my chamber door.This it is, and nothing more."

Presently my soul grew stronger; hesitating then no longer,"Sir," said I, "or madam, truly your forgiveness I implore;But the fact is, I was napping, and so gently you came rapping,And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door,That I scarce was sure I heard you." Here I opened wide the door;---Darkness there, and nothing more.

Deep into the darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearingDoubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token,And the only word there spoken was the whispered word,Lenore?, This I whispered, and an echo murmured back the word,"Lenore!" Merely this, and nothing more.
Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,Soon again I heard a tapping, something louder than before,"Surely," said I, "surely, that is something at my window lattice.Let me see, then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore.Let my heart be still a moment, and this mystery explore." 'Tis the wind, and nothing more."

Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and flutter,In there stepped a stately raven, of the saintly days of yore.Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed he;But with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door.Perched upon a bust of Pallas, just above my chamber door,Perched, and sat, and nothing more.

Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore,"Though thy crest be shorn and shaven thou," I said, "art sure no craven,Ghastly, grim, and ancient raven, wandering from the nightly shore.Tell me what the lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore."Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."

Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,Though its answer little meaning, little relevancy bore;For we cannot help agreeing that no living human beingEver yet was blessed with seeing bird above his chamber door,Bird or beast upon the sculptured bust above his chamber door,With such name as "Nevermore."

But the raven, sitting lonely on that placid bust, spoke onlyThat one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.Nothing further then he uttered; not a feather then he fluttered;Till I scarcely more than muttered, "Other friends have flown before;On the morrow he will leave me, as my hopes have flown before."Then the bird said, "Nevermore."

Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,"Doubtless," said I, "what it utters is its only stock and store,Caught from some unhappy master, whom unmerciful disasterFollowed fast and followed faster, till his songs one burden bore,---Till the dirges of his hope that melancholy burden boreOf "Never---nevermore."

But the raven still beguiling all my sad soul into smiling,Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird, and bust and door;Then, upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linkingFancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore --What this grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt and ominous bird of yore Meant in croaking "Nevermore."

Thus I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressingTo the fowl, whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease recliningOn the cushion's velvet lining that the lamplight gloated o'er,But whose velvet violet lining with the lamplight gloating o'erShe shall press, ah, nevermore!

Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censerSwung by seraphim whose footfalls tinkled on the tufted floor."Wretch," I cried, "thy God hath lent thee -- by these angels he hathSent thee respite---respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore!Quaff, O quaff this kind nepenthe, and forget this lost Lenore!"Quoth the raven, "Nevermore!"

"Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil!--prophet still, if bird or devil!Whether tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,Desolate, yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted--On this home by horror haunted--tell me truly, I implore:Is there--is there balm in Gilead?--tell me--tell me I implore!"Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."

"Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil--prophet still, if bird or devil!By that heaven that bends above us--by that God we both adore--Tell this soul with sorrow laden, if, within the distant Aidenn,It shall clasp a sainted maiden, whom the angels name Lenore---Clasp a rare and radiant maiden, whom the angels name Lenore?Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."

"Be that word our sign of parting, bird or fiend!" I shrieked, upstarting--"Get thee back into the tempest and the Night's Plutonian shore!Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!Leave my loneliness unbroken! -- quit the bust above my door!Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door! "Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."

And the raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sittingOn the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming.And the lamplight o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floorShall be lifted---nevermore!

Speed Bumps

I think it was the Commonwealth of Virginia that used to have signs along the road that said, HUMP everytime there was a speed bump on the road. Why? What kind of idiot has to go against the standard and be different? Needless to say, those signs didn't last. I think they say, Speek Hump, which is still weird. My husband would look at me funny everytime we passed one of those signs and I'd say, "Now?" and he'd say, "It's the law." LMAO.
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I've hit a few speed bumps since the New Year so I decided to slow down. Funny thing, though, someone said to me, slow down! The publishing industry works/runs very slooooowly. I think slowing down is a fine idea, but I'm not sure that's the reason for it. I mean, who cares how slow the industry goes? This is NOTHING against the friend who said that. I agree that the industry allows me the flexibility to set a pace that isn't going to stress me out. [something I hadn't done...and i was a little stressed]
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On the other hand, lucky me that the industry makes such slow progress, because I can do two or three times the amount of work in the same amount of time it takes them to read my query, request and deny my manuscript [yes, the other option is accept/contract...but let's not get ahead of ourselves, shall we?]. In a way, the industry is giving writers everything we need to be the best we can be...TIME.
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So, stop grumbling and WRITE!
LOL
Have a great week.

Looking Back *wince*

2008




Sometimes, looking back can be a bit depressing. The actual goal accomplishment could be considered lacking. I didn't finish the ww2. I'm not even going to finish the catagory I started in November for Nano [although, i'm so close...i may just call it a win :P].
In the midst of another familial transition, aka moving to a cornfield, I can still attest to several satisfying moments.



12 months of not getting pregnant


10 new critique partners and friends at Passionate Critters.


8 weeks to finish a catagory-length romance


6 birthdays


4 seasons survived without gaining anymore weight


2 things I learned about my writing


1 couple, still happily married


I learned confidence this year. It took months of sometimes agonizing review and gads of solicited advice to realize...

I can write.

I learned that I can edit and with a few helpful readers and critiquers, I can succeed.

Monday Inspiration

I appreciate people who are civil, whether they mean it or not. I think: Be civil. Do not cherish your opinion over my feelings. There's a vanity to candor that isn't really worth it. Be kind.
Richard Greenberg, NY Times Magazine, 03-26-2006
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There are times I have to remind myself of this.
That is all...
Have the best, productive, inspired, happy, LAST three days of 2008!

The Last Weekend of the Year

I haven't told my family yet, but I'm going to be writing every spare minute from now until the New Year in order to finish this story. The one I started on October 31st is at 50K+ words. I've got several key scenes to incorporate in hopes of adding another 10-15K. In a week! Oh God! I just realized how unlikely that is!!!

*breathe*

It's okay. I can do this...

Check back later for new news on my Work in Progress. *wink*