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What is Handsome?

Manuscript:
He straightened, and she noticed for the first time that he was in uniform—the soft blues complimented his eyes. The straight crisp lines contained order. And in his shiny black shoes, he was so handsome.

Critiquer:
I NEVER THOUGHT THAT SHINY BLACK SHOES MADE A MAN HANDSOME. PERHAPS I'LL GIVE MINE A BUFF.

Well, I'm going to make this clear.
Today, there is a tendency to dress down.
I've been to weddings where attendees are wearing jeans and t-shirts.
At graduations, students have been known to go nude under their robes...

So I say, YES. Polished shoes are handsome.
Care for how you look is handsome.
It doesn't matter how big your ears are...how far apart your eyes sit...or if you have a middle age pouch in front. If you care for how you look, you will appear confident and attractive.

The shoes matter.

And looking like Cary Grant doesn't hurt either. LOL


Fiction Friday -- The Hero makes a plan

A quick question for my readers[especially those with any military background]. Is there such a thing as a "Stray bombing?" Seriously, I pulled that phrase from my...tricky hat, thinking, people make up titles, phrases, crap all the time. It would be perfect for Mark, in heated concern, to question it. But, i've had 3 critiquers say, "He's a pilot. Wouldn't he know what a stray bombing is?" *snort* Um, I don't know... I think in a situation like that people want details, and saying stray bombing doesn't really translate. Am I wrong? Is there such a thing as a stray bombing? What's your opinion? Happy Reading!

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Mark Danbury strode down the darkened corridor. His shoes echoed the steady drumming of his heart as an unseen energy pressed him from all sides. A small bead of sweat trickled down the side of this face. He wiped it with a shaky hand and cursed the clench of his stomach.

He’d come to this country to fight in a war. Marriage had never been in the plans. He cut down the small measure of resentment that cropped up in his heart. His vulnerability towards her was of his own making. He should have learned at eighteen how unreliable his judgment could be when it came to matters of the heart. Bottom line, he should never have gotten involved with Margaret Keith.

An office at the end of the hallway stood open, and light spilled from the narrow doorway to the tiled floor, illuminating the speckled surface as he approached. He slowed, stopped in the last instant before his life would be irrevocably changed.

There was no going back.

Mark took a deep breath, relaxed his shoulders and stepped into the light.
Cameron Hawthorne stood quickly at the interruption. His hand moved to the side arm under his left elbow, but he slid it back into the leather holster on a breath of air. “Mark. I didn't realize the time. Have you come straight from the airfield?”

“I came as soon as I heard.”

Cameron Hawthorne wanted to enlist Maggie in his newly formed Civilian Intelligence Operation. She spoke four languages fluently and would be an asset to the team. An asset or not, Mark didn’t want to worry about her as she traipsed through Europe meeting with the victims of war and helping them find refuge. Good cause or not, people died doing that.

“Of course.” Cameron pursed his lips and scratched his chin. “So, you haven't spoken with Maggie yet.”

“No. God, Cameron. Have you? Have you sealed the deal already?” Bile climbed the back of Mark's throat. He hated being late and being out of control...and he'd felt out of control ever since he'd met Maggie. “She can be carelessly impulsive.”

Cameron raised a brow at his description.

Mark relented. “As responsible as she is, she'll agree to anything. Remember the trip down the Thames in a canoe?”

Cameron leaned back with a roar of laughter. His shoulders shook, and he held up a finger. “Yes. God, yes.” He sobered. “I need someone like her, a woman who can reassure the female victims, not everyone we encounter is going to feel comfortable with a man. She's strong Mark.”

“She's a woman.” His grandmother would roll over in her grave if she were dead. Grateful that Ethel wasn't, he silently asked forgiveness for the offense. He just needed something to protect Maggie—even a good douse of male chauvinism. “I would be obliged if you’d allow me a few days leave, sir.”

“You know I don't have that kind of authority, Mark.”

“I received my notice. I've been assigned to your civilian unit—on retainer. As of zero hundred hours, your request for a pilot is being fulfilled. I'm reporting for duty, sir!”

“...after you take a three day leave, you mean.” Cameron smirked. “And cut the crap, Mark. Don't sir me.” He moved around to the shelves that lined the western wall of his office. “Damn it. We’re in the middle of a war. I may be a civilian, but I work closely with the RAF. As a matter of fact, your first assignment is to fly reconnaissance.”

“I wasn't aware of that.” Mark shifted his weight. He cleared his throat. “You see, Maggie and I are going to be married.”

“Maggie has agreed to marry you?” Disbelief covered Cameron from his eyes to his stance, even his hands hung slack at his sides.

“We’ve spoken about it many times.” He slowly met Cameron's gaze, hoping his insinuation meshed with his words.

“Ahh.” Cameron called his bluff. He had an uncanny ability to pick out a lie. “How much time will you need in order to convince her?”

“Three days should be enough time.” He wished, banking that Maggie's spontaneity would precipitate the big event.

“Optimistic, aren’t you?” Cameron's incredulity sparked a fire of anger in his chest.

“More like stubborn,” he bit off. “Believe me when I say, Maggie will not be available to work for you after we are wed. I’ll be sending her home.”

“Do you love her?”

“What the hell does that have to do with anything?” How could anyone know what love was right now? If Mark survived this war, then love might become a viable option. Until then, all he knew was that he was very fond of her and feared for her safety.

“Twenty-four hours. The fact is, I could really use Maggie.” Cameron didn't wish Mark luck. It was obvious in the fold of his arms and firm set of his jaw.

“Please, two days, Cameron.”

“You really need to talk to Maggie. I'm actually surprised you didn't go directly to her place. Didn't you hear about the stray bombing just north of the city?”

“Stray bombing. What the hell is a stray bombing?”

“Some German plane just showed up out of nowhere and dropped a bomb. Middle of the day, a mostly deserted road on the out skirts of town. Maggie was on her way home from your grandmother's by way of the Pennington estate.”

Dread suckered the air from his lungs. “My God. I have to go.”

“Thirty-six hours, Mark. That’s all I can give you. If you can’t convince her to marry you in that amount of time, you’ll need to report to the Bentley Priory anyway. You belong in the air fighting the Germans not on the ground courting the ladies.”

“Is she okay?” His affection for her had grown, and Cameron had been witness to it, knew it. Still, he liked to keep those affections under his hat. Too many things could go wrong, and he didn't even know if Maggie would agree to this proposal. Did she want him for life—however long that ended up being?

"It wasn't pretty. She was shook up when I left her with the Pennington's."

The relief made him unexpectedly lightheaded. She had to be in mostly working order, really fine or Cameron wouldn't have left her. “Thirty-six hours then.” He saluted, his expression grim as he did an about-face. He paused at the door and turned back. “Thanks for the leave.”

“I hope you know what you’re doing Mark.”

“I hope so too.”

Goalpost Monday

Why is it that Monday mornings are full of chaos, disorder and angst?
I mean, there are TWO days to get ready for it. It should be the smoothest morning all week long, but it's not. EVER.

I'm looking forward to my favorite shows starting up this week--The Office, Earl. Also, ER is finally, FINALLY going to be ending this year. A month or so ago, my hubby, by himself watching TV, exclaimed, "Yes! I've been waiting for this for 12 years!" Then he wouldn't tell me what this was... He wanted me to figure it out... so I said, "What? Dukes of Hazzard is coming back on?" LMAO. Anyway, lots to look forward to.

Last week in WRITING: GOALPOSTS
1) Write query Letter. -- i'm postponing this. I want a better grasp on my story. That almost sounds ridiculous, but there you have it. What good is a query going to do me when I'm not ready to submit anyway, right?

2) Read/Revise through...hmm, the end? NO. that won't work because I don't have an end. Up to the end. Consider ending options, including the one already written... Write trip to France<--Big addition. Don't screw it up. -- This reminds me, I got blown away by a few critiques... it's a long story, but I returned to chapter one for some revisions. *sigh* Just a few, but enough to make me feel some serious ugh.

3) Critique one or two more chapters -- Finished one then broke for the weekend. Last week was really tiring. I didn't touch my computer all weekend. It felt like a nice break...and well-deserved, too. :P

This week Goal posts:
1) Finish Chapter one revisions, again. No problem. -- I was in the midst of a layering revision, into chapter four when I was interrupted by the critiques, sooo I'm trying to remember exactly what it was I was layering in. Maybe I'll remember.

2) Do a critique or two.

3) Finish reading The Road and Natural Born Charmer.

A Small Business

Well, this has been a week.

I received two critiques this week that left me undeniably drained. I've made some good revisions, at the same time pushing back this wall of despair.

Will this never be done????

Today, my Microsoft Office 97 pooped out on me. I've been receiving pretty regular window messages, restarts all on account of my outdated program, but i've held out hope that it would last...at least long enough to get me published. LMAO. Sorry, uh, anyway...

For me, writing is part of who I am.

At the same time, I like to think of my writing as a small business. My goal is to take something I love and make some money doing it. Isn't that what most businesses are about?

Yet, like most start up companies, I'm looking for an investor.
Anyone interested in investing in the next NYT and USA Today's bestselling author???
:D LMAO No seriously. I'm just kidding. Still, the thought is there.

I NEED MICROSOFT OFFICE!!!!

My Manuscript is running away without me.

In other words, How to keep it Simple.

I don't know how to do this well. This morning my secondary opened his mouth and said, "I have a problem with my radios."

I was like, What? What the hell are you talking about? No! No problems with radios!!! Stop it. Just stop it.

Then a friend of mine Inez Kelley said something to me that really helped!

Make the story about One Thing. [not those exact words, but that's what I got from it]

Okay, I can do that. My story is about one thing. Each thread doesn't have to be another story, it just needs to add to the ONE THING.

So I took out my pencil and started writing down all the things that would affect ONE THING. Let me give you an example. I have this ww2 setting...and spies. BUT, my main characters are actually part of a civilian unit that is working to extract refugees from occupied Europe, France, Belgium, Germany, Poland...

So, the point is...

Everything that is highlighted in this story must somehow affect that objective. I'm doing okay... I haven't completely lost my focus. Most of the revision changes will be minor... *cough* of course, i'll probably adding a scene here or there.

OMGosh. this is totally why I'm going to plot my next story.
Also, when do you quit?
I mean, the revisions just keep happening! When do I step away from the keyboard and say, this is a good story, but you're still learning to plot your craft... you might want to take what you've learned and start new, start fresh?

Monday Night Goalposts

Last Week
1) rewrite Switzerland scene~Will do that in the next couple of days.
FINITO!!! Plus, worked through C14-C16.

2) read Tribute, Nora Roberts' new hardcover single title. I'm so happy! From page one, it had a different feel to it. It's been refreshing so far and I love it.
Still NOT finished with this one, but picked up The Road, my bookclub read for this month of September.

3) My goal this week is to get a query letter started. It's time...
Did not touch this...OOPS.

This Week
1) Write query Letter.

2) Read/Revise through...hmm, the end? NO. that won't work because I don't have an end. Up to the end. Consider ending options, including the one already written... Write trip to France<--Big addition. Don't screw it up.

3) Critique one or two more chapters

New York Times Bestseller List

Okay, this is an old topic, one beaten to death by authors, publishers, store owners and readers alike. But, alas, it has only come to my attention recently--an outcome of a review on Romantic Bites.

When Randy visited and stated that we should stick to reading romance because the book we didn't like was obviously too smart for us...as it was on the NYT bestseller list, I got to thinking. And my first thought was, "If this book made the list, I want to know why?!"

So, I did some research. And I found that the real accomplishment in regards to the NYT list is STAYING there, NOT being there.

So, Randy, when you read the book we spoke of, I want to hear your opinion.

I can respect an opinion that is different from mine, but my opinion still stands, Touch the Dark missed the mark... and for more than just the lack of romance novel characteristics.

Monday Night Goalposts

My story made me weepy...
Just a little. Thank goodness the Man had gone to bed. He'd wonder what the heck I was doing writing a story that makes me cry!

I guess this'll be my goalpost for the week. I'm late...not to mention I didn't do it last week or the week before. Sooooo, here it goes.

Giving Back
I did get back into RWCcritique, so I've been doing about 2 critques a week there. I want to continue that pace and build up some subworthiness. LOL At RWC we have to do 2 critiques for every submission. Idealistically, i want to be able to put my own ms through pretty quickly once I get started...so, having a surplus of critiques will be a good thing.

Otherwise, I'm still working with Estelle and a little with Lauren, but I'm trying to make a better balance for myself. :)

For me
1) rewrite Switzerland scene
~finished through chapter 12 and plowed into 13 with more of this scene from Switzerland. I borrowed a movie from the library, a tour of Switzerland. Really interesting and helpful. I have one, maybe two more scenes in the mountains before I can head back to the all ready present plot line. :) Will do that in the next couple of days.

2) reread 7 books -Gave up on some of the rereading. My story took over, and I picked up a few new, must reads. Right now I'm doing Tribute, Nora Roberts' new hardcover single title. I'm so happy! From page one, it had a different feel to it. It's been refreshing so far and I love it.

3) My goal this week is to get a query letter started. It's time...

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